The cool mountain air invaded his lungs, clinging to his
insides and refreshing his soul. The hike to the top made for a considerable
adrenaline rush, and he was running on borrowed energy. He opened his canteen
and inhaled half of its contents in one swift gulp. He paused and looked out as
far as he could see, peering past the rocks to take in the tops of trees from
the forests below. Turning to his right, he mouthed a single word to the woman
standing beside him: “Wow.” It was a simple word for the amount of beauty that
befell the two of them from the top of the mountain, but the woman knew exactly
what he meant.
He lay down on a giant slab of rock, resting his back on a soft
bed of moss. She sat down next to him, taking in the mountain air.
“We made it,” he breathed towards the sky above. He inhaled
triumph and exhaled another item from their collective bucket-list.
The woman smiled to herself. “It took us forty years to get
up here together, but we finally did it,” she whispered. She stared off into
the distance with the man, reflecting on what the past forty years had amounted
to.
The man smiled a goofy smile, proudly showing the crooked
teeth of their childhood. “Do you remember when I asked you up here on a date
in high school, only to find out you had a boyfriend?” he laughed.
The woman laughed back, “And when I asked you up here the
next year and then found out you had a girlfriend?”
They smiled, sitting in silence, letting the years wash over
them like a warm blanket.
“You know,” the man said, “after I graduated from college
and was living back here in our hometown, I used to come up here by myself and
think of you. You were always on my mind back then.”
“When you went to college and I stayed in this godforsaken
town,” the woman confessed, “I came up here and thought about you a lot too. I
guess we never really got the timing right…” she trailed off.
“We had so many chances, but we were never on the same page
at the same time it seems,” he said. “This place sure brings back some old
memories. I’m kind of glad we never got together though.”
“Who knows what something like that could have done to us?
Do you think we would have made it?” she asked. Silence answered.
They looked out at the trees below and the cloudless sky
above, thinking about everything that had brought them to this moment. They had
each longed for this hike for so many years, but under different circumstances.
But this particular day, this particular circumstance, and this particular friendship
was perfect the way it was. Maybe in the past they would have held hands or
hugged or kissed in the very spot they sat today, but instead they just smiled
knowingly at each other and appreciated the view. “We finally made it up here
together,” they repeated in unison, and stared off into the horizon.
Their silence was broken by two voices emerging from the
forest, addressing the two old friends. “The next time you two lovebirds want
to go do some intense physical activity like this, leave your spouses at home,”
the voices joked, gasping for air.
The man’s husband and the woman’s wife exited the woods and
onto the worn path to the mountain’s peak, exhausted. The man ran down to assist
his stumbling husband, and the woman followed suit. They walked their
respective spouses over to the rock and lay down beside them.
“We didn’t mean to tire you out, but we wanted to take you
guys up to this spot. There’s a lot of history here, and we wanted to bring us
all out here together,” the woman smiled.
The two couples lay on the top of the mountain, wrapped in
each other’s embrace. They looked out towards the horizon, happy with the way
everything managed to fall into place.
Didn't see that coming..... I love the ending...beautiful story. Nice job
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